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November 9, 2012
Village sur la Montagne by *flightresponse
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Village sur la Montagne

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And over a year later... I have finally finish this relief sculpt! It contains three lights and a flickering lantern. This corner of the earth is based on Eze, France.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First off, this is amazing! I love it.

Ok. There are a few things I think you could work on though, and please remember Im not trying to be mean! I just come off that way sometimes. And if Im a bit harsh, just ignore it since Im not in the best mood.

First thing, is depth. It's a bit inconsistent with the depth. For example the rooftops. Im not entirely sure why, but it looks quite awkward. And the tree right up the front.
If it was consistent with the depth of everything else, it would just out more, but it looks flat and that doesn't really fit. Oh and if it looks that way because of camera angle, ignore!

Next is perspective. The houses are a bit wonky and oh yes Im well aware how hard it is, but perhaps when carving the base solid block shapes, use rulers and things to make it that bit more regular and realistic! ^^

One last thing. I think perhaps more detail could have been added to the background, but that's up to you. It does come off, though, like that part isn't actually finished.


That's about it. Once more, Im really horrible at being nice DX so yeah. And this work is amazing, far better than I could do! Oh,
CONGRATS ON THE DD!!!!